Milky Moon Fog Smile
Milky Moon Fog Smile Little tiny points of light shining through tonightÂ’s miasma filled face the stars come out, dance along side the silvery liquid known as the moon, as she beams pale serenity...
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Nicely done, Compact and well arranged. I prefer short. Miasma? Ill bite. Is it a scorpian of some sort? Mythical?Peace Gary Please Visit My New Board: Managing Life (Life, Mental Health and Poetry)...
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thanks for reading gary! actually miasma is a synonym for 'mist' or haze. I cam across it while writing this and it just said HELLO!!! use me instead!!! this is actually a tanka haiku string if you...
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It may sound cliche' but you definitely painted the moon, Indigo, and quite beautifully I might add *smile* Bri~
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eh who cares about cliche bri! I don't! thanks so much for the beautiful words in regards to this write! indigo Fractured from the inside unseen is the battle which rages onward within behind these...
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Quote:the stars come out, dance along side the silvery liquid I viewed in wonder, as I always do, at a clear star lit sky tonight...the moon winking its approval. Very cool title and mesmerizing...
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thanks for the beautiful reply Lost! the title did sound cool when I was thinking of something for this write. And that's how it looks tonight too! indigo Fractured from the inside unseen is the...
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The sky does have a way of drawing us into its mystery. Quote:you definitely painted the moon, IndigoI like Brian's reply almost as much as your poem! Indigo...and what a beautiful color it is! ~...
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thank you much augustsky for reading me!! the moon does make for a wonderful inspiration. indigo Fractured from the inside unseen is the battle which rages onward within behind these cracked eyes
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supernova, tonight is no different with that ever looming full moon! thanks so much for reading and enjoying the write! indigo Fractured from the inside unseen is the battle which rages onward within...
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